Kia Ora Zoe i'm Islay i am in Mamaku 2 class at Grey Main School. I really like your poem's and your slide i liked how you said that you wish you are a bird getting away from people who are being mean! Maybe you could you need to work on back ground so you can see the work or maybe pick a different colour so you can see it.
kia ora zoe I love your poems! and your back rounds just maybe next time make the words able to see.
ReplyDeleteKIA Ora Zoe My name is Olivia I really like your post but maybe next time you could look at you backgrounds with the colour keep up the good work bye
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Zoe i'm Islay i am in Mamaku 2 class at Grey Main School. I really like your poem's and your slide i liked how you said that you wish you are a bird getting away from people who are being mean! Maybe you could you need to work on back ground so you can see the work or maybe pick a different colour so you can see it.
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