Friday, July 30, 2021

A storm in the city

 Hello <3

This term for writing we're doing a paragraph per week so here's mine for the first week of term 3 :)

A storm in the city

Cassie was a very troubling child who had very vivid night-terrors & would spook everyone around her with her quite shocking-little too vivid-disturbing imagination. The day was 30th of July 1873 when Cassie’s home was invaded by a large,gangly creature. It stalked through her living room dripping from the rain strangely enough the floor did not show any signs of moisture. It darted toward her with immense strides making her run in turn towards her room where she then locked the door. The creature went right through the door with ease and proceeded to walk slowly towards her with excessive caution for a woman of her stature. Cassie went towards her window only to see the pouring rain & the bustling street filled with umbrellas. She took a moment to consider her two options. 
She had made her decision.
It was later discovered that “creature” was purely a delusion brought to life from her undiagnosed schizophrenia.
On that day she fell from grace & the window.


1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Zoe.
    Im Abbie from totara 3 (although you already know that).
    I really like the descriptive but morbid story you wrote. Next time you could maybe make it a bit longer or give some backstory on her.
    Keep up the great work.
    -Abbie :)

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